THOUGH NOT MY FAVOURITE FRUIT

This is my first attempt writing a sestet with keeping atleast 3 literary devices in my mind while writing…If you find any do comment down!

Here goes the poem,


Just like the rising sun it looks,
Or sometimes like a green parrot,
Pulpy,juicy,sweet,gradient,sour— 
So diverse in variety from many places,
But just not my favourite fruit when it's ripe,
I like it when it's sour and tight.

Published by Amritaa

Just a 14 year old...my favourite stuff are photography,drawing,painting,using laws in random situations and enjoying the nature...

3 thoughts on “THOUGH NOT MY FAVOURITE FRUIT

  1. Umm too hard to find them. But I think ur sestet has inversion in the first line. Then enjambment. And gustatory imagery I think. And maybe diverse and variety are tautology. Not sure of them though. Thanks for the poem. My brain’s working now 🤭😂

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